Revising Messages: Directness and Conciseness
Revise the following short email messages so they are more direct
and concise; develop a subject line for each revised message:
Sorry it took us so long to get back to you. We were flooded
with r_m_ Anyway, your r_m_ade the final 10, and after meeting three
hours yesterday, weve decided wed like to meet with you. What is your
schedule like for next week? Can you come in for an interview on June 15 at
3:00 p.m.? Please get back to us by the end of this workweek and let us know if
you will be able to attend. As you can imagine, this is our busy season.
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